UNDERDRESSED REVIEWS

I TOLD YOU!!!! I TOLD YOU THERE WAS A LADY'S BUM UP THERE AS THE AD "Underdressed Reviews".

I WASN'T MAKING SHIZ UP

SEE

SEE IT NOW?!

LOOK AT IT

I TOLD YOU SO D: I'M NO PERV!

So anyway, Rant aside

I've been getting feedback on how I make my character backrounds. It wasn't good. The feedback was helpful but basically I suck. However, Pirithive helpd so much by asking specific questions about my character which lead me to the conclusion that I do know about them. I just forget that even though I know who she is, everyone else will have to rely on the story.

Also the story I'm writing got way more complicated when I wrote the backstory. ****.