Designing a campaign

[Joaco]

I’m new to designing. Here are some ideas I had for a fictitious campaign about Mootales (I really need to work on the name). What do you think? Please, do not only judge design, but also content.

poster #1
poster #2
poster #3
poster #4

[darkness]

Ambitious…

[greenelf]

nice, but the black text on the lower right is hard to see (as in, my eye is drawn to the center text, and then I have to search to see the other text)

[DarkDragoon]

OH JOA YOU CAD YOU.
I LOVE IT.
I CAN’T SHELL OUT MY MONEY FAST ENOUGH.

[FunnyFroggy]

1. Not English enough. 0/5
2. Ugly font. 0/5
3. That ‘i’ is fugly. 0/5
4. No citations. 0/5

[Joaco]

FunnyFroggy said: 1. Not English enough. 0/5
2. Ugly font. 0/5
3. That ‘i’ is fugly. 0/5
4. No citations. 0/5

The font’s not really ugly, it’s called Nilland and it’s slab-serif. I used Helvetica LT Std Bold first, but then I tried something less cliche…

[FunnyFroggy]

You and your hipster fonts.

[Pirkid]

Pretty and pretentious.

[Aaron]

I think the addition of a logo would benefit the posters. All of these are a bit too simple, I think a simple graphic or design would attract more attention.

[MasterCheeze]

Make everything in Comic Sans. Pro font only, but you can make it work.

[EvilStranger]

What’s this about? :O

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