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  • #10274
    Nass
    Participant

    Yeah, I probably didn’t follow ANY poem format…. Just read.

    To Lisa

    To Lisa
    The girl that I love.
    The girl that I can’t stop thinking about.
    The girl I’m never tired of.
    The girl I’d write a poem to no doubt.

    To Lisa

    I wish we’ll always be forever.
    And if our love severs…
    Then I will be left alone.
    I hope our hearts stay intone.

    So cheers to you Lisa!

    You’ve changed my life for good.
    Exactly as I knew you would.

    One thing still lies,
    can I be your number 1 guy?
    Or when I send you this letter…
    It’s time to say goodbye?

    The End. 🙂

    ~Nass

    #10276
    AxiomFable
    Participant

    I’d love to participate in this current one but the poem’s already been submitted to an actual competition and I shan’t risk posting it here in case they think I’ve copied it. Sounds intriguing though.

    #10317
    dee32693
    Participant

    You win Mike! =O

    You have a few mistakes and the first stanza is sort of clunky and it doesnt flow very well but overall it was cute and a teensy bit dorky. Congratulations, you are the winner of the first contest! 8D

    Olly: 0/10

    Pirkid: 0/10

    Mike: 7/10

    #10323
    SirPainsalot
    Participant

    *cough* BY DEFAULT*cough*

    #10324
    David
    Participant

    I wanna play.

    #10325
    Pirkid
    Participant

    Oh my.

    I could have beaten that. ><

    #10334
    Nass
    Participant

    Fuck yeah!

    Edit: Contest 2 registrations and topic voting are now open! 😀

    #10335
    David
    Participant

    I WANNA PLAY

    #10336
    Nass
    Participant

    topic idea plx

    #10337
    David
    Participant

    Eum, history haikus. XD

    #10341
    FunnyFroggy
    Participant

    mememe

    #10347
    David
    Participant

    Can we start it already?

    #10348
    DarkDragoon
    Participant

    IDEA PARA TOPIC!
    Lemon Meringue Pie<3

    #10353
    Nass
    Participant

    Well, if Dark doesn’t want in sure I guess.

    Anyone wanna judge?

    #10355
    FunnyFroggy
    Participant

    Why do we need a topic? D: Can’t we talk about anything?

    Now my plan is ruined… 🙁

    notopixpl0x

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