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dee32693
Participant*throws pie at you*
Eat pie nubcake >O looololol get it? i threw a PIE cause you’rer a nubCAKE roflmaaoo *fail @ joke*
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ParticipantC!
if YOU shoot him while they already dont trust you lots, thar’d be mutiny afoot!
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Participant*throws pie at you both*
The least you could do is use grammar properly in this thread!!! >O
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Participant8.5/10
the last line in the second stanza is kind of weird. Also the flow of either of the two stanzas seems on different wavelengths. I get both and otherwise, it rocks. Great job! ^^ Feel free to argue your point on wether i should raise the bar ;O
Teach YOU not to be late! >O
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ParticipantE, the other soldiers are being noobs >O
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ParticipantYou win Mike! =O
You have a few mistakes and the first stanza is sort of clunky and it doesnt flow very well but overall it was cute and a teensy bit dorky. Congratulations, you are the winner of the first contest! 8D
Olly: 0/10
Pirkid: 0/10
Mike: 7/10
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Participant*throws bucket of cold water on thread*
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ParticipantLOL IS ANYONE DONE!??!?!
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ParticipantNOOOO…UNLESS YOU HEAL. BUT IF U DONT HEAL OLLY I DONT WANT TO WASTE TIME! TIME=VERY very IMPORTANT IN zOMBIE wORLD
oh i left caps on….*too lazy to change*
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ParticipantOoo good job pirkie! =D
umm how about D? But not all crass and unemotional. Like you at least communicate some sort of ‘im sorry but there are others who need my help who have a better chance at life’
yikes that sounds evil Dx
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Participantway to be followers people. you guys are so easily manipulated =O
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ParticipantDo your best guys! ^^
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AND SPLITTING UP IS INSTA GUARANTEE FOR DEATH !!
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