At Least I Learned From Her
Look with your eyes, see with your mind,
the words of another, are easily disguised.
Learn from mistakes, continue with grace,
Close your eyes to find light in this place.
Hold your hands open, but be ready to fall,
for betray runs deep, you must try to stand tall.
The whispers will linger in the back of your head,
The chatter of babble of thoughts others have said.
These words of regret, you must learn to ignore,
for this message of doubt will bring no rapport.
I try to find balance, instead find I am lost,
A path that's forgotten, a line never crossed.
Depressive reflection, new fears of rejection,
what person can say that they feel no repression?
A light found in darkness, a doctrine of truth,
they follow it blindly, they fear life of couth,
A sadness I see that she's wasted her youth.
When you open the doors of emotion, be prepared to have it slammed in your face.
~Pir <3
21 Comments
168 words.
Ooooh, poetry category.
I have a feeling it should be ‘betrayal’.
But nice rhyming skillz, Pir. ;D
But nice rhyming skillz, Pir. ;D
I made up composition on the spot. XD
I like Betrayal better. :3
*copyrights*
I noticed when you had the title “Composition” that the ‘s’ looked like an inverted ‘z’ in the “Latest Blogs” section. Just thought I’d let you know. :(
Oh, lol, I didn’t mean the poem I meant the word ‘betray’ should be ‘betrayal’ in your poem. XDDD You know that thing where you assume people know what you’re talking about? Yeah, I have that to the max. /irony
But I’m glad you like it anyway? xP
But I’m glad you like it anyway? xP
INDEED.
And meh, I’m keeping it nonetheless. 😛
Something happened, Pir?
lol dat gurl dat luv u u shuld liek om nom nom her
Pir, on other sites are you known as Nightbane…?
Rhyming is easy as hell. Lol…
I made up this poem about Romeo and Juliet in English class. It’s awesome.
Um..no. I have a lot of other names though. I have Shadowbane.
Isn’t that a WoW boss?
Yes, but I know a guy who’s username is Nightbane and he had a girl “betray” him too.
Except he went about it a different way than writing a poem… :
That poem made me
JIZZ, IN, MY PANTS
JIZZ, IN, MY PANTS
Haha, my friend and I were talking about that song the other day.
I’M ON A BOAT
I’M ON A MOTHERLOVIN BOAT!
Like a boss.
This blog promotes synergy!
PUSSY YEAH
That sounds so sad. 3
lol “like a boss”