Betrayal.

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At Least I Learned From Her

Look with your eyes, see with your mind,
the words of another, are easily disguised.
Learn from mistakes, continue with grace,
Close your eyes to find light in this place.

Hold your hands open, but be ready to fall,
for betray runs deep, you must try to stand tall.
The whispers will linger in the back of your head,
The chatter of babble of thoughts others have said.

These words of regret, you must learn to ignore,
for this message of doubt will bring no rapport.
I try to find balance, instead find I am lost,
A path that's forgotten, a line never crossed.

Depressive reflection, new fears of rejection,
what person can say that they feel no repression?
A light found in darkness, a doctrine of truth,
they follow it blindly, they fear life of couth,
A sadness I see that she's wasted her youth.

When you open the doors of emotion, be prepared to have it slammed in your face.

~Pir <3

21 Comments

Pirkid 5 June 2009 Reply

168 words.

MasterCheeze 5 June 2009 Reply

Ooooh, poetry category.

Ezyan 5 June 2009 Reply

I have a feeling it should be ‘betrayal’.

But nice rhyming skillz, Pir. ;D

Pirkid 5 June 2009 Reply
Ezyan said: I have a feeling it should be ‘betrayal’.

But nice rhyming skillz, Pir. ;D

I made up composition on the spot. XD
I like Betrayal better. :3

*copyrights*

MasterCheeze 5 June 2009 Reply

I noticed when you had the title “Composition” that the ‘s’ looked like an inverted ‘z’ in the “Latest Blogs” section. Just thought I’d let you know. :(

Ezyan 5 June 2009 Reply

Oh, lol, I didn’t mean the poem I meant the word ‘betray’ should be ‘betrayal’ in your poem. XDDD You know that thing where you assume people know what you’re talking about? Yeah, I have that to the max. /irony

But I’m glad you like it anyway? xP

Pirkid 5 June 2009 Reply
Ezyan said: Oh, lol, I didn’t mean the poem I meant the word ‘betray’ should be ‘betrayal’ in your poem. XDDD You know that thing where you assume people know what you’re talking about? Yeah, I have that to the max. /irony

But I’m glad you like it anyway? xP

INDEED.

And meh, I’m keeping it nonetheless. 😛

Dest1 5 June 2009 Reply

lol dat gurl dat luv u u shuld liek om nom nom her

Blackboy0 5 June 2009 Reply

Pir, on other sites are you known as Nightbane…?

Arladerus 6 June 2009 Reply

Rhyming is easy as hell. Lol…

I made up this poem about Romeo and Juliet in English class. It’s awesome.

Pirkid 6 June 2009 Reply
Blackboy0 said: Pir, on other sites are you known as Nightbane…?

Um..no. I have a lot of other names though. I have Shadowbane.

Isn’t that a WoW boss?

Blackboy0 6 June 2009 Reply

Yes, but I know a guy who’s username is Nightbane and he had a girl “betray” him too.

Except he went about it a different way than writing a poem… :

Spade 6 June 2009 Reply

That poem made me

JIZZ, IN, MY PANTS

MasterCheeze 6 June 2009 Reply
Spade said: That poem made me

JIZZ, IN, MY PANTS

Haha, my friend and I were talking about that song the other day.

Arladerus 6 June 2009 Reply

I’M ON A BOAT

FunnyFroggy 6 June 2009 Reply

I’M ON A MOTHERLOVIN BOAT!

Like a boss.

Dest1 6 June 2009 Reply

This blog promotes synergy!

Arladerus 6 June 2009 Reply

PUSSY YEAH

spygirl57 6 June 2009 Reply

That sounds so sad.

Aaru 9 June 2009 Reply

lol “like a boss”

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