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AznRiceFan
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Blackboy0 said:

AznRiceFan said: I have some MASSIVE issues with this plot. As far as “Does it work?”, yes, your game works.

What’re your issues?

So plain, boring, and uninspired. I’m just not “feeling” it. The plot is not believable. For starters, why do I get plopped onto an overworld map with four party members without so much as an explanation? I assume you’ll elaborate on that though (or at least I hope) so meh. And then you have this guy who’s evil/not evil and that girl… I’m not feeling it. It has potential, but it just all happened so fast and with no flair. But of course, it’s up to you how you wire your plot together.

One word of advice is that I felt like I wandered too much trying to figure out where I was supposed to go. You could use cues or dialog to help point the player in the right direction. The whole time I felt unsure where I was supposed to go or do next… For example, it took me a couple minutes to figure out I was supposed to do something with that tree on the overworld to get to the next part.