I seem to write poems a lot @_@. Maybe it's because I can't stay committed to a story for now….BECAUSE I'M GETTING A CAT! 😀
Let me hold your melody
In a world of soundless dreams
Far away from our world’s strife
Is the pure and silent sound
Tell me of this song you sing
Is it like the falling snow?
Beautiful but never lasts
Almost there, but never here
Save me from reality
Where the endless lies roam free
Innocence that’s gone away
Wary of my present days
Hold me in your gracious arms
Close the distance in my heart
Hum the tune I held for you
To the world we both can’t see
E-cookie to those that can guess which metre I used (and yes, it is written as a blank verse).
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I have no clue actually. I’m not good at poems
A cat? :0 What kind of cat?
…
I think I love you.
(As a friend of course).
Awesome poem <3
Depends what the SPCA has now. We have our eyes on a Siamese mix though =).
AHH CAT AHH CAT AHH CATTTTT
Have fun with your pussy…cat.
I liek pussies. :3
Pussycats are kewl. lolololol 😛
Hahaha.
You have some fans, Taelin. Excellent job.
I love you.
~
@ Everyone: thanks~
We have Fife (the cat) at home now, but he’s hiding under our sofa. Not even treats can bring him out right now xD.
Is it trochaic tetrameter? C:
And is your userpic from Fate/stay night? ‘Cause it looks like Saber. O:
KITTY?!
You can have my gerbil’s corpse to lure him out.
The corpse is about…12 days old.
Mmm, delicious 🙂
@Chameleon: Your avatar makes me laugh everytime I see it. 😀
Thank you. It makes me laugh every time too. 😀
And is your userpic from Fate/stay night? ‘Cause it looks like Saber. O:
I don’t think it has a specific name, but it’s like:
DA da DA da DA da DA
And yes, it is Saber from F/sn =).
😀
Awesomesauce.
Trochaic meter = set of two syllables with the emphasis placed on the first syllable. ^^;
Schooled! By a …15 year old?
Lol, I’m not very good with names XD.
‘S okay. I’d be shamed if I couldn’t even remember the name of poetic meter. ;___; My English teacher drilled it into us and we even had a test on it. *grumble*
That sounds horrible xD. My summer school English teacher was so easy and nice ^^.
I think I already forgot everything I ever learned in AP English.
Ahhh, AP. Maybe I should take it next year, just for the lulz and that it looks good on my transcript.
xD
I’m guessing you’re an upperclassman, then? (Er, just on the probably-very-inaccurate basis that only the juniors and seniors at my school are able to take AP English classes xD)
I’m probably not going to take any AP Eng. class ever because 1. I don’t have room for it in my schedule and 2. I’m too lazy/not-English-inclined. xD;;
If I go by the fact that your high school is 9-12, I’d be a junior this coming September.